Haha I love new words too. Karcier is so cute :D

Yeah! you updated!

So, they are getting pretty snug with each other this early in the relationship, aren't they? Or maybe a few weeks/months have already passed. I don't know. But then again, misery. I like.

call me naive, reality forsaken, slow, or just tired, with a cold, and in crunch time for finals, but i'm a little clueless on who one of the people was in the beginning. okay, not totally clueless, but my guess is that it was karcier...?i was a little sad this was short, but glad you updated. and yes, i definetly get the feeling karcier is much much deeper into the relationship than elentia. but then again, she's still warming up to as authors it is our job to make our character's lives miserable. otherwise it is just no fun! (pouts)anyway, happy writing and have a great summer! (i get out on thursday)wait, you have almost 100 reviews! congradulations! my record for reviews is about 20 for one story or something. then again, i'm really inconsistant when it comes to updating, so i brought it on myself. oh well, it gets , i got to go. two finals tomorrow and i still have a bit of studying left. toodles!

Haha! Finally some action between Karcier and Elentia. I'm excited. Gotta love the fluff. Fluff is always good.

Anyway, like always I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm curious to see who's point of view you'll be in if it's not with Elentia or Karcier.

Keep up the great writing and don't forget to have fun with it.

~**Nicole**~

drowning in the fluffiness...FLUFFY!so cute! yay!

*sqush* you rock :D

You might have had Elentia come around too quickly. you might try waiting a few chapters before she does when you revise it. it would help build suspence.

Karcier is wonderful as a worried big brother! you should deffinately write a book where he and Elentia have children. I would be so cute to watch him being overprotective!

fluff is , it did seem a little sudden. if you plan on re-writing it or editing it in the future, i just have one more suggestion...focus on elentia's thoughts a little more and show how all of a sudden she reveals her true feelings to herself. but other than that, great chapter!

That secret-revealing was really funny, of course that was only until it got to the end. Poor Elentia and Karcier. They led so terrible lives. So, now the love fest starts. Better yet that there is a new plot development.

This is really interesting and entertaining to read. I can't wait until you update again. I'll be looking forward to it!

hey! i forgot to ask on my other review and it won't let you review one chappie twice now, so i'm asking on this chappie...is oldera a real language, based on a language, or completely made up? when i create languages for my stories i end up combining words and syllables from different languages, or when creating names of countries i give them a characteristic like "good" and i'll look that word up in foreign dictionaries until i find a word/name i like. so, yeah, i was just curious. once again, i hope you update soon, i do like this story a gracias whatever...Skeeter the Groundhog

Yeah, making up new places is always the fun part. Thank you much for the compliment. I really appreciate it.

This chapter was really good. I do like the knew and improved Karcier. He's not so immature anymore. I think you should have him confess how he feels about Elentia, then maybe, if you decide, Elentia would give him a chance. Just a suggestion though. I'm not the author, that's you.

Always looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great writing and don't forget to have fun with it.

~**Nicole**~

5 reviews is seriously not bad at all. i like this so much it's on my favorites list, so keep it up! i brought you cyber part where elentia was getting snuggly with him threw me off guard, but she only really wanted to read and be annoying, right? and the last little bit was perfect...but poor karcier is going to get the completely wrong idea. that poor ...question! did karcier see elentia being born, because she has red hair too, right?and rencier is absolutely adorable- he's still very much a kid, but he has that courageous wiseness to good! update soon or i will never ever send you cyber-cookies again!