Reviews for Murky waters
lackluster chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
wow. i like how this flows so easily, it's not hard to read, but it's also so depressingly hopeful, if that makes sense. good job! keep writing!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
wow! on my favs list! I love the topic and how you held a hope in a raft in your seas...
TheGrinch chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
*Insert semi-witty comment*
alligater20 chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
What irony: here you're saying your poetry sucks, but in reality it's actually quite a breath of fresh air among some of the other fictionpress "poetry" garbage that is wasting bandwith on this site. "and try not to drown / in the sea of tears i've cried." that i love. great work )
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Great poem! Write on!

Anna