wow this is a great poem.. i read it because i have one with a REALLY similar title and wanted to see how u interpreted it... really good actually. love this poem. so different to mine, but so much more feeling adn truth! id really appreciate if you had a look at my work... no pressure though. peace and love from holly.

this is beautiful. i love how it talks about both the truth & what people think about the girl without it being choppy. great job.

I love this poem! It's so good.

I love the Imagery in this poem!Keep up the good work!