Reviews for Canada Day
B. M. Reed chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
very odd poem. it's like you're in love but you don't want to but you do? i dunno. it's good, though. nice job.
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
This was alright... I think it might've been better if you took out the lines you had in parenthesis and either omitted them completely, or worked them in in some other way. They were just very cliche how you had them there, and they could probably be expressed in another way. Just my half-asleep opinion.