i liked it...although i wish it were alil longer! i couldnt stop reading..

I really like this story. It's a creative idea and the story really is going in a good direction.

interesting format you did there, is this story complete? yeah i know you mentioned something like that in the 2nd chapter, but i just want to make sure.

10's problem seemed quite simple at first glance, but well, one can dig deeper and find a maze of complexities in a person. so keep up the good work, and it was nice of you to come up with an idea like this.

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