Reviews for Crystal Clear for Those Below
xbluxmoonx chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
wow. i liked this so much. it was very descriptive and the fantasy in it was wonderful. awesome job.
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
I loved the descriptives in this, I could see the entire thing unfolding in my mind. I love mermaids and you definately did them justice. :) The only critique I have is that the meter is inconsistant; I don't know if that really matters in blank verse, though...so disregard the comment if it doesn't apply. Keep writing.
Islandbreeze chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
I loved the images that I got from your wording and this was written beautifully, I don't know too much about poetry but I enjoyed reading this! I love mermaids too...I was thinking about doing a story...but time goes, and *shudders* school starts tomorrow for me! Anyway, very lovely poem!:)
Angelbmo chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
really good...keep it up
Lady Isaiah chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
This is so beautiful...I love it lots!
Lilon Pergus chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Very nice. I especially like this stanza:

"They take my handsI leave the sandsI will never returnTo these lands".

All in all, very good poetry. Post some more!