|Reviews for What You Can't See|
| Plej chapter 13 . 7/4/2008
This is very nicely developed and everything, the characters, I feel like they are growing more, and changing, not just staying the same the entire time. Change is good. Especially when the reader can relate too. Until later... PLEJ.
| PenelopePotter chapter 19 . 6/13/2008
Oh dear, you killed him... Meanie. *Pouts*
| sk8ergurl007 chapter 20 . 6/5/2008
i can't believe it ended like that!
i loved it and hated it!
and i freaked out
but i still loved it!
| Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 15 . 5/20/2008
Lol, my name's Maya too! Anyways, awesome story.
| Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 7 . 5/19/2008
| Ellie Nelson chapter 8 . 11/6/2006
I've always told myself that, when I live on my own, I'm going to put that quote over at least one door. Haha, seriously. No lie. I'm not ripping you off, it's a real, actual thought that's crossed my mind on more than one occasion before.
But really, just to be cute, like, "Heehee, aren't I clever? A quote about a door, *over a door*!" And painted, not carved, to be more casual. Hey, just thought that was funny.
Anyway, I found this before school this morning, and I'm hooked! I'm off to keep reading!
| K.T. The opinionated chapter 19 . 10/28/2006
Jerk . . . *Whimper*
Not many stories do this to me, but I almost cried.
It's not fair! No! No! No!
- a depressed reader
| shameless1 chapter 19 . 10/3/2006
Oh, not Rae! That just sucks on ice!
| Celebros chapter 19 . 9/30/2006
NO! God, I hate getting attached to fictional characters. Now I is sad...
Good drama in that chapter, though.
| Heart of the Blood Drinker chapter 19 . 9/28/2006
*hisses* Consider yourself flamed. You LEFT it at the cliffie... TT~TT
Hope you eventually get it up, regardless of se/prequel decision status.
| K.T. The opinionated chapter 18 . 9/27/2006
Hi, it's taken me so long to review this chapter. I haven't been on the site in a while because I couldn't get the search do-whacker on it to work. It kept on telling me to try again in a few , how did I know that Alex was Gale's dad? I dunno, I just like figuring stuff out ahead of you for NOT hurting Raebon. By the way . . . just because the hunter's bane is going to be his . . . *Whimper* death, that doesn't mean he has to die anytime soon. Say . . . I dunno . . . two-hundred years from now have it kill him. AND there's always the option of it not killing him. Just because it killed its previous owners doesn't really mean anything . . . right? *Sob, whimper-whimper*Anyhoo, I am still in love with this story and can't wait for the rest, -K.T.
P.S. How's your finger?
| Celebros chapter 18 . 9/6/2006
Oh, my gosh, this story is amazing! I love how irs not totally serious but its not one of those ditzy vampire stories. I love the characters, love the plot, I love everything! I can't wait to read more.
| shameless1 chapter 18 . 9/6/2006
OH man oh MAN. Not Gale! Oh I dar near fell out the seat when I realized you'd pulled a cliffy on me!
| Adaku chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
Yes, another vampyre story, see the way I wrote vampire. lol Tia is cool, reminds me of my cousin. Also you're not a dork, you're cool. Till next time, No
| pianomasterette chapter 18 . 9/5/2006
NOO! cliffhanger! Bah. No way will you REALLY let Gale die.. he can't die... so someone has to save him! -grumbles- Now your story is going to be stuck in my head untill you update! Lol
Good update deary :) I look forward to the next!