Reviews for What You Can't See
Ninja Reviewer chapter 5 . 7/6/2005
Dude. Seriously, update soon. This is nice, and Raebon isn't the sterotypical vampire. Wh00t.

So yeah... fish..and updates...

-Seeiko
DragonLady chapter 5 . 7/5/2005
Yes, it's me. _ I shorten my name when i dont sign the reviews.

I think it's funny..."I'm here to save you!"

"But i dont wanna be saved!"

"Yes you do!"

"No i dont!"
BlueKlearWater chapter 4 . 7/4/2005
O_O THIS IS THE BEST STORY ON I HAVE EVER READ. YOU MUST UPDATE! i'm so into it, i even wrote in all caps XD. seriously, this is an awesome story! I can't wait to read more!
BobDuck chapter 4 . 7/2/2005
I really like what you've written so far.
DragonLady chapter 3 . 7/1/2005
*snoogles Rae*

If he's several centuries old (as vampires have a tendency to be) then it's possible he knows what "really" happened in the history book.

History is written by the winners, you know.
HellsBroomCloset chapter 2 . 6/30/2005
This is good so far; it's well written. I liked the bit about the rapping teacherXD
scrtshdfgry chapter 2 . 6/30/2005
this is intriguing...please continue.
DragonLady chapter 2 . 6/30/2005
My taste in music dictates that i find all rappers hillarious.

"ROFL! Jeez, you call that singing? I call it every last one of you got together and came up with one melody and you guys just TALK in time with it!"

; One or two songs excluded, I never been much of a rap person...the image of that teacher trying it is funy, though!
No Volume Control chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
Dude ... this is an awesome story! :D

The way you've written this is lovely; easy flowing and humorous w/o the sense of an author going overboard with the details.

I can also easily picture Raeborn in my mind, and what a handsome fellow he is.

Update soon! ;]
DragonLady of Avalon chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
*snoogles Rae*
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