Reviews for Whispers of a Deceiver
Drowned-Rat chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Writtings are thouroughly artistic. Mixing dialouge with descriptions :D

Reading this makes me feel like theres a voice inside my head, which means this is going in my favorites :D KEEP WRITTING MUHAHAHAHAH!
aries-diva-JC chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
good job... u said be critical though so i'm gonna come up with sum really picky complaints lol... in the fifth line, i don't think 'inflicting' was the best word choice... maybe 'causing' would have flowed better... hm... okay, that's all i can think of... i loved the ending, especially the part where you said 'but in this life, how can i live on?'... great job, keep up the good work...
AmaranthineMisery chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
well written and very strong... keep writing
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
Good!