Reviews for Double Edged Swords
FamishedNight chapter 33 . 4/4/2013
Awesome story!
izziet chapter 33 . 6/28/2012
Luv the story. it's really good.

luv izziet
non.graceful chapter 2 . 7/4/2011
This chapter was a bit boring... I think you should revise it.
non.graceful chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
You've made a good start to this story and I'll try to review as I read every chapter. If I don't I'm either captivated or have given up on this story and moved on to another.

But I hope I can read this as it's set in the best age of time!
CutieSOS chapter 33 . 2/18/2011
It was so good.

i loved reading it.
Warriors-Skywing chapter 33 . 10/11/2010
I can't believe this. This book is just AWESOME! I LOVE IT! I - This - ... I salute you. XD
Bubbly Girl chapter 33 . 8/12/2010
Wow. This story is seriously INTENSE! :) It was non-stop action with many awesome twists to it! I have to admit that I absolutely love the ending! :) This story is definitely my kind of book. Thank you for posting it here on fictionpress for me and so many other people to enjoy! :) Keep up the amazing work and I will try to read the sequel in my free time! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl
rosieroo chapter 33 . 10/30/2009
i really like this story! and her and flin got together... aw! flin is so adorable!
MahinaMoon chapter 32 . 9/8/2009
Hah, get them on a minor charge. We'd better find out who she was intending to poison though!

*clicks the button*
MahinaMoon chapter 31 . 9/8/2009
Liss shows a lot of courage here. You can taste her anxiety, and see her working past that. It makes her into a much more real, imperfect but admirable, person.
MahinaMoon chapter 30 . 9/8/2009
Rushed? Maybe a bit. But I like quick pacing. For a spy novel, I would think that's good. You don't want the tension to slack. Build, release, build, do it fairly well.
MahinaMoon chapter 29 . 9/8/2009
Out from one challenge and on to the next!

I really like that Liss is more perceptive of her feelings and the possible feelings of others than most characters in romances. You can only have so much angst and denial before it gets annoying and unrealistic. At least when Liss was in denial about her attraction to Nicar and Flin, she could recognize and somewhat admit it.

It looks like we'll find out more about Yarr, artifacts, and the history of this world. Excellent.
MahinaMoon chapter 28 . 9/8/2009
Yeah, Flin is crazy high-profile for a "spy-master." He does better as simply Nicar's right hand man. Imma gunna think of him like that before I get more disturbed by the fact that everyone knew him, BY NAME, except Liss.
MahinaMoon chapter 27 . 9/8/2009
Twists and turns!

Actually, it *wasn't* making much sense before for Nicar to back Cadman's rebellion, then turn around and aid Sorang. I mean, it made sense for Nicar to unbalance Harat, but Cadman's not that stupid.
MahinaMoon chapter 26 . 9/7/2009
Yup. As transition chapters go, this was effective. Rebekha's suicide gave it color and meaning, but you moved us right swiftly into the next arc of the story. The pacing is good. Somehow it feels like it's floating, how Liss is drifting along in depression...but it's actually very succinct and to the point.
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