|Reviews for If only you could see|
| Abby Sequioa chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
nice. it has a few little bumps in the flow but otherwise its really good!
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Sincere and endearing.
| AshGurl2897 chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
That was cute and poignant. Great!
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
Great poem! Most of us can relate! _ I love it; keep writing!
| InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
luv it! u go girl!