Oh God...what's there to say? I can already tell that you're one of the best writers I've read so far on Fiction Press, most unlike the majority of wannabe romance writers. And the usage of words is just amazing. I mean, I usually scoff at the "tragedies." But your's was, as I believe I've said before, unlike the rest. I mean, positive negative energy had never flowed through my veins so much as when I read your story. I find short stories exceedingly hard to write, because I can never set teh atmosphere and climax in such a short while. But your's was perfect. :)"When will my River come and show me the way? One river led to another, and his mother gave life to a child tainted by the gods' sign of watery Hell..." The picture this painted was so..poetic. It was just so... Ah! I've found a simple word that can sum it all up:Beautiful.

12goingon30PS: ;) I'll see what I can do about making it a song! ;)