Reviews for Summer Falls, it’s a Big Mess Now
The Lark Ascending chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
I realy liked this line:

"He tries to catch their dreams...

But they slip through his coarse fingers like butterflies..."

and the rest of it worked quite well, too.
Aredhel Carnesir chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Teehee, I didn't know I was THAT funny. P And no, I didn't kill the class clown, but that was mostly an actual experience. P Thanks for the reviews!

Onto the poem! It starts off really nicely, but "and now he's spinning - or was that the browns fault?" confuses me. Who/what are the browns? Other than that it's a beautiful piece of work again, it just seems a bit choppy.
Rozlin chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
again beautiful...