|Reviews for Phantom and Blades|
| Clodhopper chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
oh, thats sad. a good start, but sad. beginnin' it with depression...why did Teneil had to die? horrific to be killed by a friend...horrific to kill a friend. the boy's maturing should be interesting to behold.
the writing in this was very good, very smooth. it kept my attention, the dialogue felt natural. overall it was very well done