|Reviews for Bitter Slice of Heaven|
| Princess White turtle chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
| lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
love this. the short style is one i often use- you can pack so much more emotion in without watering it down at all. great work.
| secret thoughts revealed chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
| fire-breathing-kitten chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Very short, obviously, but I think you have effectively gotten as much feeling as you could into those three lines.
| Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
hmm... i like the oxymoron going on there...