Reviews for A World Away
outsidersgirl chapter 17 . 10/8/2007
this is good
outsidersgirl chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
this is good
pianogal chapter 17 . 9/6/2005
aww, that was so cute. i'm so glad that little David made it through the night and that Brooke ended up with David. that is awesome. i'm so excited that you got inspired to write more. great job!

Kim
theeighthhouse chapter 17 . 9/6/2005
again i am reading your stories..wonderfulness!
pianogal chapter 16 . 9/5/2005
so Danny just went away and Brooke ended up with her husband? i understand the problem but I WANT AN ENDING! Please...i don't care how long it takes but i would really appreciate a real ending. i hope people give you some ideas. i have no idea how to end it either. sorry.

Kim
j.m.burford chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
Very good first chapter You have a great style of writitng and i am very interested as to what will happen in future chapters
pianogal chapter 15 . 8/4/2005
aww, Danny is so sweet and i feel so sorry for him. i'm glad that David is back but i'm not sure who i want to end up with Brooke. i like both of them and i just feel so sorry for Danny. just when he was about to get back with Brooke, David comes back. yeah, definetely drag out the labor. i like it!

Kim
pianogal chapter 14 . 8/1/2005
oh my gosh, and you had me so worried he was dead. now you bring him back? you are so cruel to put me through all of that. just kidding. its alright because it was a great twist. i feel bad for him though because Brooke pushed him away. awe, come back soon with more.

Kim
pianogal chapter 13 . 7/29/2005
she's recovering and Danny still loves her. that is so sweet. is the baby coming? i hope they can get to the hospital. this is getting a little happier. good job!

Kim
lucia marin chapter 4 . 7/27/2005
this was always an interesting subject for me. it sounds like you know your material - you do a good job writing brooke.
pianogal chapter 12 . 7/27/2005
what a great idea from Danny. i'm glad he didn't just give up on her and actually decided to get her some help. it does seem like Brooke is on the road to recovery. i think all she needs is a way to work out her problems and i think with the therapist she can do that. great job!

Kim
pianogal chapter 11 . 7/26/2005
awe, i feel so bad for Danny and for Brooke. he just wanted to comfort her but he can't understand what she is going through. great job! i hope this gets happier soon.

Kim
pianogal chapter 10 . 7/25/2005
yeah, seeing and hearing her dead husband just might be a sign of insanity. but its kind of sweet in a really weird sort of way. i hope this gets happy soon because its making me really sad. but its still really good, just sad.

Kim
pianogal chapter 9 . 7/24/2005
its alright. i suppose it makes the story better. but is he really dead? cause they didn't find the body. hmm, i wonder. or is something going to happen with Danny? hmm, i can't wait for more. great job!

Kim
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 9 . 7/23/2005
omg why did you make david died..he doesn't derseve to died...keep updating girl...so loving it...going good so far...
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