|Reviews for Little Girl|
| Teddy Ricker chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
That was so fantastic! I love when people stand up for themselves, not pretending that they are too weak and feeble. I love poetry and writings with that true, underlying moral. I thought that it was an amazing display of words. Palmarium! P'Dale Buddy out
| April Hammer chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
What an upbeat, inspiring poem! *applause* I love it very much! Such a nice thing to stumble upon in all of the sad poems around FP! I like your rhyming pattern, too. This has such a nifty song-like quality to it!
| frisca-magister chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Aw...thats a really cool poem..I love it...good job!
| running-with-mascara-eyes chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Hey, that was great poem.
One thing i have to comment on would be the bracketed sentences in the last stanza, maybe you should leave them out coz the stanza itself is self explanatory.
But good job
| lackluster chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
i like this! it's almost lyrical like a song. great job!