Reviews for Little Girl
Teddy Ricker chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
That was so fantastic! I love when people stand up for themselves, not pretending that they are too weak and feeble. I love poetry and writings with that true, underlying moral. I thought that it was an amazing display of words. Palmarium! P'Dale Buddy out
April Hammer chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
What an upbeat, inspiring poem! *applause* I love it very much! Such a nice thing to stumble upon in all of the sad poems around FP! I like your rhyming pattern, too. This has such a nifty song-like quality to it!
frisca-magister chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Aw...thats a really cool poem..I love it...good job!
running-with-mascara-eyes chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Hey, that was great poem.

One thing i have to comment on would be the bracketed sentences in the last stanza, maybe you should leave them out coz the stanza itself is self explanatory.

But good job
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
i like this! it's almost lyrical like a song. great job!