Reviews for Wrong
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
i know how you feel- this was very beautifully written and i liked the format P
Drowned-Rat chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Poetic cruelness :D Lots of disturbing images this has :D
Kira Deleria chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
I love how you make the point of showing how the daughter/son wants to be free. Prays, wishes, needs to be free, but is chained down by the mother's words. Her awful, awful words. Very good poem, wonderful descriptions, very good. :)
liz anya chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Very sad.