Reviews for For the Love of the Game
Guest chapter 2 . 6/6/2014
amazing
Guest chapter 30 . 3/22/2014
WONDERFUL! I LOVE THIS STORY! But seriously, can you please do a one shot of Brandon and Shelly in the nearby future? PLEASE.
xxSongBirdxx chapter 30 . 1/16/2014
love this I think I'll just stick to this ending and not go and read the sequel this ending is the best
SiriuslyPink chapter 2 . 10/15/2013
Switching to third person ruined it for me. Maybe if you'd had third person from the very first chapter instead of switching halfway in the second I'd feel differently.
SiriuslyPink chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
So many short, simple sentences. Mix it up a bit.
Guest chapter 30 . 9/3/2013
Wonderful!
ClosetReader chapter 5 . 1/5/2013
Okay, so now they are both equally annoying. Haha. I guess I'm forgetting that they are still in high school so their actions may seem very immature and juvenile to me.
ClosetReader chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
Shelly is so bloody obnoxious. She's totally abusing her power. I like that she knows her stuff and does not have any ulterior motive for being the coach but I feel like the growing rift is mainly her fault and as coach, she is not doing anything to help from the way she is acting.
Ms.Jennylautner chapter 30 . 1/1/2013
Awww so freakin cute ! Loved the ending ! I'm glad they got together ! Gosh you got me all mushy and teary ... Lol . Thanks for writing such an amazing story (:
heal me forever chapter 30 . 10/23/2012
man dis was pretty much awesum i sincerely wish dey will be together FOREVER I MEAN IT ..:) glad i read dis awesum stry ..forever love dem kyle is such asweet heart other dan brandon of course ;)
Guest chapter 30 . 7/16/2012
Awww... I loved the story!
Megan :)
ndagutierrez chapter 30 . 6/7/2012
I actually laughed at some of the parts. Shelley's so good at comebacks! I love how they bicker and how Brandon wasn't afraid of telling her how he really feels. It's not too sweet but I like it that way. I just adore Shelley's character and also their family and friends. I just hope that they stay togetherrrrrrr. :))))
loveSZbrownie chapter 22 . 5/30/2012
i get that this is a fairly old story and that your writing has probably significantly improved but im just going to comment on this story as it is. I like the idea that theres a girl challenging the sexist sport and how theres such strong conflict between her and the head guy. But what i would like to say is that from what I've read, I don't believe it. The story is completely centred on those two and you've come up with all sorts of unrealistic events just to have scenes with them together. And the motivation for Brandon to pursue her (chelsea blackmailing him with the size of his penis). I know it fits, because he's all up himself and wants to protect his pride, but it doesn't feel like it flows with the story completely. I'm not sure. I like your writing for the most part, but it's just plot things like this that kinda irk me. I think the problem is that you've introduced a lot of characters which makes it difficult to explore their personalities and their histories. They've become really one dimensional. Morgan was introduced with a really sullen attitude then she meets shelley one time and then becomes super super close to her and then suddenly is all for pushing the n two together. Again, I acknowledge that this is an old story and you probably would want to edit it too. So just saying that for this old version, i think its good but it could be great.
NeverHeardOfYou chapter 30 . 4/28/2011
Just finished re-reading this story and its still makes me laugh... I love it to bits.. :D
2nd chapter 4 . 4/11/2011
Yeah... It was okay at the start, but now I'm getting the feeling that Shelley is a MAJOR Mary-Sue...

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