Reviews for For the Love of the Game
slowlydancingtothestars chapter 16 . 8/28/2005
update soon!
DeliciousAmbiguity chapter 16 . 8/27/2005
Aw. Shelley is such a great coach! Taking her intoxicated players home, so cute. Continue soon! Zachary should appear more often!
Hidden Depths chapter 16 . 8/27/2005
congrats you have a new reviewer! i really like this story, its fun and whatnot...excuse me for this sensationaly crappy review but im tired and my head hurts, i just wanted to review to let you know that your awesome and that i cant wait untill the next chapter. I promise in the next one I will actually have something interesting to say.
complacent-lin chapter 16 . 8/27/2005
hey good chapter...i'm really confused about the zachary whole prank thing...couldn you explain? anyway ...anymore random pranks coming up? lol...keep updating!
sweet revenge chapter 16 . 8/27/2005
Ya know, the thing I like about you is that you update consistantly. I am following different stories, and yours is one of my favorites. I adore it, and it is written really good. So, is Zach coming back? I am dying to hear about this model! You should have him move to where ever Shelly lives and become a heart throb and make Brandon jealous and the Team BS' (haha, love the name. So FUNNY!) job would be more complicated. Oh well, I am sure whatever you do it'll be great!Why do you not like this chapter? Sure, it was kind of put out there, and I appreciate that you don't want to kep your fans waiting, but I am sure we still loved it. Thanks for revealing Lucious Loyd!

Your Anti-Drug chapter 16 . 8/27/2005
I feel nothing but complete and passionate love for this chapter. I seriously am in love with it. I love Shelley and Brandon kissing and demand more of it. Well, beg for more of it? Please? *puppy dog eyes*
fairy pwincess chapter 16 . 8/27/2005
Ok, Shelley is just confusing me now. I thought she was meant to get mad at Brandon, not kiss him. I know you explained the whole kiss thing made her forget, but that still doesn't explain why she wasn't mad at him earlier.

Update plz!

~*fairy pwincess*~
Small Marshmallow chapter 2 . 8/27/2005
Hey, I really like the way this story's going. Though I'm a little confuzzled about the tension about Brandon (I love that name)and Shelley. Does Brandon really not like her? Becasue I thought I percieved some flirtatiousness between the two of them. Anyways, I really like it, and guess what? It's going on my Fave Stories List! o!
acira chapter 16 . 8/27/2005
nice... i hope zach will be back...update!)
Nocturnal silhouette chapter 16 . 8/26/2005
Still adoring this story! I like how it's drawn out. it's not a bang they meet, they kiss, they have hot sex and then the end kind of thing.
akastrobe chapter 16 . 8/26/2005
(in my email address, replace "PERIOD" with ".")

Anyway, i'll start off by tell you how much i love your story. It's definitely original, and it definitely works. However, the title doesn't really reflect the story that well. Something to do with football, instead of law, might make it more identifiable. After all, any Romance story can be named "Laws of Attraction", but this fic is brilliant. It needs to stand out. I don't know much about football, but something like "Ms. Football Coach" (but less lame) might set this fic apart. Just a suggestion.
horrible writer chapter 8 . 8/26/2005
Um, okay, great chapters so far but I just wanted to say that I love A Walk to Remember, the book more so than the movie. So... yes, thats all. lol
xpressgirl chapter 16 . 8/26/2005
its was good! i want to see her revenge on brandon! update soon!1
cherriibomb chapter 16 . 8/26/2005
another quick kiss! how cute. i hafta admit iwas suprised brandon didnt get mad this time but it was cute how he reacted! AND wow! so like update soon. it 1:18 AM and im here readin! hehe i am one devoted reader! haha )
horrible writer chapter 3 . 8/26/2005
This story totally accomplishes it's goals- funny, sincere, and bubbly. I love it, although it may not have the same atmosphere as some more serious stories I've read. Exemplary job so far. :]
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