Reviews for Tied Butterfly
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
that was cool - very interesting poem...not sure I understand it though
FanGirl X chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
Wow! I like this style. And they way you use spaces and bold letters and italics. It's all so cool! And it really adds affect!

((-Fangirl X-))
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
This is a very strange style, but I like the actual subject a lot.
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
you did very well on this. not bad at all for a first try. superb work!

DarkVoice chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
beautifully done i loved it awesome job keep up the great work.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
That's a really interesting style. Nice job!
I can't believe it's over chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
bery good. i like your new style your tying! keep writing
Written chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
the formatting is clever and cool. my old english teacher used to say that poetry was form, and this is a good example.

well written! lovely.
Titanic chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
This is a very interesting stule. I really like the way the line, but let her fly, spells out butterfly. That's really cool!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
nice! i like this a lot. its impact is great thru what it says and the way its presented. a fine piece of work! more :D
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Hey, gorgeous poem! I absolutely adore the formatting! Very nice! Keep writing!