Reviews for Crimson Tears
FantasizedMusic chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
Your use of paradox/contradiction is interesting, and most of it works, but some of it just doesn't make a lot of sense... why is it destined but not meant to be? How can it be eternal but end every evening? They are fine paradoxes; they just need to be fleshed out a little bit more. The ending is really good, what with the poem talking about this being your future, not your past. Nice work.
luna neko chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
the 4th and the last lines made me smile. nice rhymes tho the first part was kinda 'shaky'.. and the 4th stanza, 2nd line was also kind of a bit, how do i say it...'odd'? ; [forgive the crit, it's a, uhm, odd habit ;;]

oh~ and thanks for the review! never expected someone to find my works... ; how did you find me anyway? just curious, since no one's ever visited in a very long time. ; thanks~
sialgunavez chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Beautiful! I loved it..I'm speechless. This is AMAZING
Tk.T chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Sad. It had a bitter-sweetness about it at the same time. Interesting, though.

Happy writing!

Tk.T~