Reviews for Beautiful Stranger
Jadza chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
omg... I cryed when I read this... I love it.. I really do.. it hits home. hard... I cant write music... I can sing it and I can write the words ... but I wish I could find the music with in me... as you obvisely do...
FantasizedMusic chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
I tend to not review pieces like this, love poems that are more personal to the author than other poems. Typically, these kinds of poems sound better to the author than to most readers, because they don't have the backdrop that the poem is written around. However, this is a little more accessible. There's a lot of raw sentiment here, with "And as your hair dance to the music of the air". (Though, change "dance" to "dances".) Good work on this.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Wow, what a beautiful song! This is completely amazing, I wish I could hear it but unfortunately i'm in Australia... you're from the Philippines? I'm half Filipino! _ Go Filipinos! lol! Anyways, keep writing; you have SO much talent!