Reviews for The Insect
The Dark One chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Yes, I too hate buzzing insects. Of course, if you spray them with soapy water, it ruins their wings so you can stomp on them.
Louellena chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
much as bugs do have a habit of being annoying... was a welcome read for time off - and after thinking of it for a while, it seems like some sort of weird dance [especially for insects]

Lou
Knightmare Elite chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
A very relatable story. I've had many run-ins with flies and such. I hate how they wait till you turn off the light to start their harassment.

I keep a bottle of bug spray in my room just for that. Though the toxic cloud really hinders the joy of defeat. Especially when the room is small.

Excellent work. I could really feel your agitation.
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
haha, brilliant end you got there. amazing imagery you used here. yes, i find bugs in my room very annoying, even if they arent really bugging me!
pandaluv11 chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
*cracks up* Sorry to be laughing at your cost, but I did find it quite humorous. *wink*

I like all the description you used. And good grammar is a plus. You described the event very well.

Keep up the good work!