|Reviews for Nothing lasts forever|
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
sad but beautiful, although i cant offer much condolence to you for this ironic revelation we all discover- i must say you have a way with your words!
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
I can really relate to and strong. Well done! queenvixta
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
i like this...i can relate & i like repitition of the first line
| meant2be chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
awesomely awesome job
yah, i have a poem on called nothing lasts 4ever...
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
aw babe, my heart goes out to you so much, i know exactly how ur feeling...i'm really sorry that you have to go through this, but you will get through and know i'm here for you every step of the way, never doubt that...but this was amazing so much emotion and love and sadness, i love it...well done. lots of love Alex
| Quixotic Daydreamer chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
o...pretty! I liked the way you ended it! kw
| darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
That's so sad... I really like it. The repition of "I asked you for your forever" was really good, and how you altered it in the last stanza was also brilliant. I usually pick a favourite stanza.. but I cant, tehy're all really good. Super nice job.
| graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
good rhyming, and i like what it says. i can totally relate to what youre trying to say. i hate it when ppl u love/care abt let you down...its like one of the worst things u can do to a person
| aries-diva-JC chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
this poem is so sad, but well-written... i especially liked the second passage... fantastic... keep up the good work... btw, if u have time, please read and review sum of my stuff, especially 'once in a blue moon'... thanx...