Reviews for The Race
JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
B-e-a-utiful :) I especially liked "That's what keeps me/ running" because I can see another meaning to it: God is the only thing that keeps me running/going in life. He is like the fuel that keeps the motor of my spirit I hope that made sense. Good Job, God Bless, xRachx
The Postscript chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Beautiful...that's all there is left to say, this is wonderful. God Bless, silent.
Getuie chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
There's such a calmness... such an unwavering belief in this poem that one can clearly picture in one's mind. The comparison of the swan's feet and running was also so striking. Well done.