Reviews for Save It
Orion Demasecus chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
Very angry, but i like it. Another peom in my good books. Sorry i haven't read any more of you story but i haven't had much time. By the way i now have chapter 8 up and i replaced chapter 1 with a revised version. I hope you like the new chapter 1 better. Well that's all, keep up the good work.
Les Yeux Minuit chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
omg this is such a good poem i can totally see where you are coming from...and the emotion is soo deep that you can feel your anger seething through the words...great job you should definetly write more! i loved it!
Morphine Season chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Hello! Me again!Uh, anyway, very amazing poem. Kind of depressing and it made me feel like someone else was actually telling me this to my do you get your inspiration/ideas? I usually can't write poetry.
darkpaladin13 chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Nice, I would have liked it longer but only because I liked the flow to it and liked how your phrasing was. Relatable too, good piece . . . I feel like some pissed chick is telling me this