Reviews for altho not really
MrFlames chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
This is so transient I felt like I should have been able to just roll with it, but your structure and style made it a bit hard to do that. I wasn't particularly thrilled with your content, since your imagery seemed a bit cliche (which is of course very hard to avoid in a [mostly] romantic poem).
euphemismsforlukewarmtragedies chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
gorgeously written. the juxtaposition is beautiful and my favorite line is "about how you broke my heart into a beautiful butterflies".

awesome :)
lookingwest chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
this was the most unqiue poem i've read all night so far, and by your summary i wasn't sure what to expect, if it be much at all, but as soon as i read the first line i knew this was going to be good. it was a great read.