TheWickedHaveMoreFun chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Alisha Marie chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Very funny. No really this was funny and I like funny.
youzi chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
wacky and confidently irrelevant! keep writing D
Midnight Lynx chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Man, This is so cool!I totally dig this,I just went and saw squirrels at the park...There so cute!And thinking cute little squirrels being lead to conquer the world is a disturbing and fuzzy thought, especially if your the leader! but awesome a good work!P. they carry chainsaws? ~MidnightLynx~
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Eh? Squirrel Nirvana? 'lol' if i may say so. Original subject matter is your strength it seems, even when it comes to humor. i was starting to analyze, but blah- a good poem. made me laugh. : )
Benton87 chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
i liked the poem. it rhymed and was humorous.
Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Oh wow, this is amusing. Though i am a bit said nothing was stated about rubbing the squirrels on you. Also, great flow and rhythm.
LauraKM chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Beutifuly sereal. Made me laugh, lots. I love the parasite hamsters. Bizare, but very very good.
lookingwest chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
hm...well, i'd like to know what exactly inspired you to write about squirrels, but if it works, allow it to work well, and work well you had it do. ...this is the first poem i've ever read with the word "hamsters" in it, so feel honored. :D