Reviews for Looks might not be misleading
Darkwolf259 chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Awsome keep up the good work :)
Cassandra-Adara chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
I like this, really hoping you'll update. Nice dialogue, easy flowing and realistic. Watch for some typos...but we all make those. Also, try to put in a little imagery. Right now all we have are the characters voices and personality, and it's great, but would be even better with a good visual. On another note, my eyes change like that! I have mood eyes. Do you have them too, or do you know someone who does?
The Chocolate Factory chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
um okay it's okay. but whats up with the sister thinking about his eyes being blue? i mean that doesnt make sense in her rambling
Anters chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Sorry it took me longer to get back to you! Fourth of July and all that was keeping me back. Anyways, it is a slow beginning, but with a little more detail and storyplot I'm guessing is in the second chapter, I bet this will be a good story! You won me over with that last line. Kewl, update soon! -Anters-