Reviews for Nations, Down This Barrel
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
oh my fucking god.
kalmia raphael chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
short and striking.
do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
i could've sworn i'd already reviewed this. oh well. that last line is a fucking shotgun blast to the chest. god damn, you are a genius.
this is britt chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
wow. really. whirling.
Sharakinpaix chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Wow, this poem got me thinking right from the start!

I adored your alliteration in the first stanza. Is "him" humility?

This has a desperate feel in it, nicely conveyed!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Ah, very thought-provoking. I love the multiple layers to this, the feeling of empowerment, splendid!
smile persephone chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
I love this abstract vein that holds. I was going to pick out my favorite parts, but I don't believe that I can. It's all so amazing.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
I love the line The world is gripping a pistol in its hands & the last line.. awesome job