Reviews for The Game
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 6 . 9/8/2005
What the hell is K doing? He should just knock the bitch out. AR. I hate her. Is she really has needy and tipsy as she makes out though, or is it all just an act? Upadte soon, luv Kaitx
Devls-babe chapter 6 . 9/7/2005
But I wana be... Fine... I'l bee all innocent... It'll be easy, right?

Anyways... God story. *Licks Normrak.* Don't hurt me!
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 5 . 9/7/2005
I do not trust this slutty woman. There is more to her than there appears to be that is for sure. I'm beginning to understand more now and that evil vamp kidnapping her is part of the game, or test. Only problem is that it won't be a game for her if her future husband loses. I do not like the way her new kidnapper is knocking her around. I realise that is sort of the point, but I am getting very angry and having violent impulses. She seems to be attracted top him though. That is just wrong! He may be attactive but he is pure evil. I thought you had stopped writing this so I had a nice surprise. Thanks for the update. Luv Kaitx
Forrest Nymph chapter 5 . 9/4/2005
Hello... If I had bigger boobs (Much so) And a tan... Could I be the sluttish chick?

*Giggles* I'm just kidding... If I were her I couldn't have the yummy Normrak... Or the mini-rak. XP Under-stand that?

M Suasage and bad spelling...
miss understanding chapter 5 . 9/2/2005
Yay! You updated! I was so afraid that you'd discontinue this chapter. Then I was reading through my faves list and found this! *girlish squeal* Omg, you made Normrak even eviler than the last one. Ha ha...and Kander's sort of...pervy. I really love this story so much and I can't wait until the next chapter. Toodles! ~choco
yv chapter 5 . 9/1/2005
nice nicenice!i like the whole kander seems kinda, uh, well, he's not the perfect male lead you always seem to see in some stories. and i like that.
Nyte Shade chapter 5 . 9/1/2005
Really cool. I love vampire stories and this is soo different i love it. Kandler is so weird and Raina does some dumb things she needs to be quiet sometimes but anger f* u up
starchild33 chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
hey, i really like this story, it has an interesting plot. I can't wait to find out more! Update soon!
hatespinnerbait chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
hm... well i'm intruiged.. but i'm still not sure...
hatespinnerbait chapter 2 . 7/13/2005
still confused.. but i'll read the next chapter
hatespinnerbait chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
so confused... but i suppose that's why there's more chapters.
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 3 . 7/12/2005
This made me laugh. When he said he wasn't exactly her kind and her thoughts that folowed it. He actually seemed quite cute when he was showing his speed and fangs to her. Reminded me of a little boy showing off and shouting "Look what I can do. I told you!" I'm not entirely sure biting her was the most smartest move. I realise he had to show her but it doesn't help the comfort level having you kidnapper drinking your blood. I want to find more about the ceremony though. Hope you update very soon. Luv Kaitx
miss understanding chapter 3 . 7/10/2005
I love this story more with each installment! _ I really feel sorry for poor Kander. He's trying so hard to be nice and Raina's just being mean. I really like how he refers to denial as a 'game.' lol. Anyway, to wrap this up, great job!
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
I'm glad Rhiana is putting up a fight. I would be too. You can't just kidnap somebody and tell them that they are meant to love you! Jeez. Does he have any social skills? From the story his mate told him I'm thinking this is something that maybe happens in their culture. They chose girls to be their wives and kidnap them. Is that right? Who was that other guy in his room? The one who wants to kill her and hear her beg? Because I REALLY don't like him. This leaves us with a lot of questions. Which is good to ensure our interest. I want to find out more about what is going on. Hope you update soon. Btw I liked the way he brought her to his place with his powers. So much easier than having to carry her all the way like mortals. I wonder if her parents are going to even notice she's missing? They certaintly seem to want to win the selfish, neglecting parents of the year award. Luv Kaitx
miss understanding chapter 2 . 7/8/2005
I think this one flows a lot more smoothly. _~ Though the plot is great in both. I hate the suspense... (cries). Please update soon! :-P

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