|Reviews for star dust|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
I had tingles while reading that.
You are extremely talented, never stop writing!
| twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
beautiful oh so beautiful.
| gummibared chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
love it XDit's really good!
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
something about this one is very alluring, it's so muddled as usual but this strange kind of attitude and image came to me, and it's hard to put it all together cause it came really fast when reading it, i love it though, some awesome imagery here, lovely poem
| HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
goosebumps the whole way through...its so pleasant to read your work. i find it amazing how much imagery you can place in such little space...great work
| acccountkiller chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
I love...I love! And usually am not much of a fan of free verse in this form, but you're brilliant! I'm speechless, this is just so great...stardust is such an overused theme, but you don't make it cliché at all, all your work is so original! Or even if it isn't, one completely forgets the subject is clichéd! Love, Mia
| oh frenzy chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
This is simply unwaveringly beautiful. The gorgeous style you give to it enhances the sensuality of it. It paints such a bittersweet and lovely image.
And thank you for pointing out that typo. Sometimes I just start writing so furiously I don't realize mistakes like that. :)
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
the sun cackles as the moon weeps.-This is genuine, flame-touched detail, it sizzles across the page. I took two images away from that line; the literal being that the sun burns, its amorus, it never changes, it is a joker based on its very nature (a living joke, it can only ever be one thing.) Where as the moon, a nocturnal creature. Blue rose, the night in a sense creates rain with the moisture in the air, it weeps because it is forever changing, it ebbs and flows, it is not only the complete opposite of the sun but it does everything that the sun cannot. Personally this line also touched me deeply on an emotional level. The sun is always so careless with itself, you never hear about famine and drought with the moon. I also live in Washington and when it rains in the winter, it literally feels like the moon is weeping, it falls so thick and for so long they almost are tear drops. Lovely as always.
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
awesome piece. i like your use of fantasy and ethereal imagery, partially veiling the undertones of a dark act. nicely done.
| emotional-Teen chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Very kewl! _ oh can ya pleaz R&R my new poems ::pouts:: pretty please XD hehe anyway awesome poem!
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
breathtaking and strange,(but thats a good thing quite a lot of my poetry is very strange) so pretty,and i love the idea.
| Millay Inspired chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
I didn't understand your enjambment, it seemed a little random to me and therefore could probably use a little work. I liked the flow of idea, even though I may not have followed it completely.
I think my favorite part was the italicized rhyme.
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
breathtakingly beautiful, you know you have a way of capturing feelings and putting them into words, i like the way you write...
thx for giving me such a nice review D, but i have to say you're so much more talented than me, and I love reading your poems to learn from them D
keep it up!
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
I like the format and the idea of worshiping stardust...
| account not in use chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
It's wierd in a really good way...