Reviews for Soft Lullaby
Ryenon chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
You live up to the title "Queen of Angst"...you really do, I loved it.
blackrosestears chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
It's pretty good. There are parts where it doesn't seem to flow right though. And I would've changed "We can fly away to a far away land" to "We can fly away to a far off land" But that's just how I would've done it. I did love the chorus though. I can very much relate to this. Good job!
Nestalgica chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
very well done, i liked this one a lot... the "die, lie" rhyme is kinda weak, though

~Max W.~
Darthen chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Aww, a happy ending. Nice poem, it is rare that one finds a happy ending among the depressing angst ridden stuff that I always find, and I relish the chance to read a sweet poem like this. Good job.
soi.deliciosa chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
very gentle and lovely.