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wow, this is a really good story. i liked it alot. it made sense, it wasn't rough. it had nice descriptions. your good at making stories. but, i found a few grammatical and spelling errors in the story. it was probably just the fiction press that did it, though. i know it happens to me alot. but, all in all, great story. and thanx for the review, i really appreciated it. well, KW!~davida

Wow! I absolutely love this story!

And yet, I hate it, because something almost exactly the same happened to me with those uptight, snobbish type people at my school.

Please update soon, I can't wait to see where this goes.

p.s. Send me an e-mail if you'd like me to beta this story, I've never done it before but I'd like to try.