Reviews for Debt
the lovelorn paper chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
First of all, loving the rhyme scheme.I can see why this is in the horror category. At first, it reminded me of a poem called "The Friend" by Marge Piercy. But then everything just went all crazy on me. I loved it, honestly. Keep going crazy!
yinyang-shadow chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
...WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD? my GOSH you're WONDERFUL! i'm sorry to hear about your bf. i really am. and your depression. i'm kinda like that myself now. can't write. well, i'm trying, and so, apparently, are you, so WAY TO GO! keep it up, and smile big, CAUSE YOU'VE GOT A NEW FAN! ( Inspiration continue to bless you, along with Creativity, and may new friendships seek you out quickly and full of the kind of love that we all need all the time. :) ~yinyang-shadow
heart complex chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Wow. I love this poem...It's so deliciously evil.
Tom chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
OOH.. nice. Dark, artistic. I loved it!