Reviews for Karma Returning
the lovelorn paper chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
This hit a little close to home for me - I had a very deep emotional and personal connection to this. Loving your work, as always.
yinyang-shadow chapter 1 . 7/5/2005 are AMAZING! that was so beautiful! your words flow so well. i love how it reads. i also love it's abstractness, but how it still makes perfect sense. you know just how to end it too. "and i'll walk here in torment because i forgot"...absolutely wonderful. ::bows down to you:: may i someday write as you're definately going on my faves. respect forever, yinyang-shadow
Senorita Diabla chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
I love the flow of this! The cadence is nifty and the rhymes seemed very easy and well-fitting. The subject you're portraying takes something of a sideline to the aestetics of the rest of the poem, but nonetheless, it's awesome too. Wonderful job!

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