Hai! I luff this! I really ish that you would write more! I'm in love with poor sam...

Aw, but why? I like it...hehehe.

The PoV's. are interesting and s lightly kinky...Aw poor Adam.

I really enjoyed this story. The words flow nicely...Not to insult, but could you be just a bit more discritive? Sorry if I sounded rude,Kyo-chan

I love reading angst on rainy afteroons, and this one fits the bill. I love the way you manage to inject a common theme in every chapter. And that part where Adam said Adam should have been his brother... I just went "Aw..." :)

I think it's perfect the way it is. I love the style you put into this story, it just makes it feel so alive.

That was a very tragic chapter. Poor Adam and Sam.

M...this is a great story. I like how you use the present tense - kinda gives the fic a sort of, eh.../different/ quality and tone. I usually don't like the Angst genre, but I like how this is started, so...I'll keep reading. Ooh, and I also like how you incorporate the cardinal sins into the whole thing. Nice. :D

Wow I have read a lot of stories about suicidal people and how horribly they are treated, but yours has a unique tone about, It is probably John.

Oh damn, another great chapter. I could practically feel, no I did feel the emotions circulating in this one, betrayal, pain, and all those other goodies.

I could actually feel my heart ache and when you get a reader to feel and expirence the story like that you know you 're doing something write.

-Whistles in appreciation.- This is a truyly beautiful story, and I'd love to read more.

I like the new dynamic Adam brings to the story. Hopefully he'll be the protection Sam needs. And John should go through much torture!

Maa~ I read this and then forgot to review. Sorry! X3 This is why you have to remind us more than once. ;

This is the kind of stuff that really makes me glad I don't go to a normal highschool. Honestly. Your good charectorization probably comes from having examples to go from (unfortunately).

Red

I wanna see Sam make them pay.

Damn, this is effing great. I love it, love it, love it! Hm, okay no more sugar for me o.o

But seriously I really enjoyed this chapter, and cant wait for more. This was fabously written, and horribly sad, oh dear Sammy, your angst is beautiful.

Poor Sam, well I can't wait to see what happens next XP

Wow, very good. The description is...wow, keep it up can't wait to read more! _

YIKES! Half way through this story my computer froze and I had to restart! I've been searching desperately for it and here it is! This is really, really good! I feel totally bummed for Sam! Keep up the fabulous work!