"Too witches’ chants" - did you mean 'To witches' chants'? Overall I loved it! Seriously, I'm a great E. fan! I'm so obsessed that I did a parody of his "The Raven" and "Tell-Tale Heart"... it's not posted on here... but yeah... that's how dedicated I am to him... plus I love the supernaturals, especially vampires... their so sexy... great to know that someone else is into the same things as me! Keep it up, Raving Blackbird!

hey, thats really cool! and you say you arent good at poetry, pah.

This is a really good poem. The rythm makes it spooky and it's very descriptive enough.

It's a bit out of season though. I feel it should be read by a campfire or some other Halloween party.

Hee hee, very good, Gilly. I like this one.

I like the rhyme and structure. Nicely done.