Reviews for Flawed
hamx chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Something I have learned: Making a scar upon paper via pen can be easily erased by tearing the paper so as to prevent dwelling over it later, so I suppose it is better than engauging in self-masochism.

I'm definatly able to relate to this poem. I think everyone has felt as if they are restrained by someone and in return they take it out on themselves, be it physically or mentally.

Nicely written.
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Very emotive poem, powerfully written. The ending's really sad; this is a beautifully expressive poem. Great work.