Reviews for Nigi Onnanoko
i-wish-it-was-make-believe chapter 3 . 7/6/2005
hey thanks for the review,have you ever heard of a manga called 'tokyo mew mew'? your 'story' sounds alot like it.
Aedyn Star chapter 3 . 7/6/2005
interesting. somewhat confusing, but interesting. what does the title mean? and thanks for your review!
BlueDragonGirl1 chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
"toke" is spelled "took". Just to help ya' out. I'm really glad you updated.
Penelope June chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
Yes, it is long enough, but, like i said, you might want to put a little more, uhh, personality into the character's. It seems pretty good so far, so don't be disencouraged.

~Dagger~
Penelope June chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
You should add a little bit more about the people in this chapter, because all we know is that Schools out and the main charachter goes to the beach with some friends. ((I'm srry if I'm being a little bit critical.)) most people, when reading, only scan the page, so I only had a faint idea about the clifhanger,so, inorder to get people to go, 'hey, wait a second,' you might want to put just a little more imput on the dark , bout how critical I am, but, I'm just trying to help u improve your story

~Dagger Jeniva~
BlueDragonGirl1 chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Aw! That was too short! I want more! Much more! Update! Please! :)