Reviews for Child of Darkness Book One
Raymond Lamar Gilstrap chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
Nice start. Wow, I see that you are already finished with this story and you are working on a sequel. I've got a lot of reading to do. Thanks for reading Dark Society. I really appreciate it!

Until Next Time . . . .Raymond
Aegis chapter 2 . 5/17/2006
I have to say I love the beginning, it's very promising and I like the author’s style already. The very beginning is almost Cliché, but that’s good. I happen to like well used plot devices as they can suck the reader in early, as she has me. I’m looking forward to reading more and soon.

As for improvements, it's really too early for me to be able to offer any constructive criticisms, as I’ve not gotten to know her characters better. But I certainly see no ‘flaws’ in the writing style.
Adaku chapter 5 . 5/16/2006
vampires...dark and interesting creatures, I've been watching too much vampire movies. Nice chapter

Adaku chapter 4 . 5/16/2006
Adia, that's one of my charcaters names as well, it's Nig. for Beautiful. great work, your story is most interesting!

Adaku chapter 3 . 5/16/2006
wow, I'm an idoit, so this one is the oringal, and Daughter of Night is the sequel, so I was right in the first place...? whatever, keep up the great work. _

Adaku chapter 2 . 5/15/2006
interesting chapter you have here, wow I gotta read more... Anyway, keep up the good work!

BloodnBlades chapter 33 . 1/13/2006
great story and the size of it was enough to keep me busy for a while i hope that there is more chapters in the sequel any way can u email me to let me knowtanks
SlythDancer chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
Very interesting. Great first chapter. It really holds the reader!

unicorn dragons chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
Wow this is a really good story. I'm not done yet, only on chapter 9, but I like it so far. It draws you in and I don't want to stop reading. I'm looking forward to finishing it then reading the sequel.
Aneedegorarose chapter 33 . 10/21/2005
Wow that was absolutely great, I loved reading it! Is prescott your real surname cos its mine too lol.. A really awesome story!
AubriannaKnight chapter 33 . 10/21/2005
sniffles and more sniffles...I'm so sad this story is finished, I had a good time reading it. Woo Hoo, GO Adi.. She kicked some major Kieran booty. I'm proud of her.
blackflame28 chapter 32 . 10/19/2005
more now. more.

i really like this story... thru it's uber twisted.. i read it all thru my shift at work tonite.

so, in other words, more. now.
AneeDegoraRose chapter 32 . 10/19/2005
WOW! it's so wonderful! A truly great story!
AubriannaKnight chapter 31 . 10/19/2005
I feel so bad for Reem, he is one of my favorite characters. I hope Adi can save them all. Hopefully backup shows up, or she all kinds of randomly gets some kind of magic power.
AubriannaKnight chapter 32 . 10/19/2005
I think that Adi leaving, and rushing off to Kieran's, was a lack of common sense. The way your story is written, she doesn't seem fully trained and strong enough to go up against Kieran yet... Is she enough of her own person again, as to not revert back into a state of servileness when she tries to go against him? Also in this last chapter (32) I was really confused. Why did it go back to her dream from the beginning of the story? It just randomly jumped, and I was like where did this come from, what does this mean?
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