Reviews for Child of Darkness Book One
AneeDegoraRose chapter 32 . 10/19/2005
WOW! it's so wonderful! A truly great story!
AubriannaKnight chapter 31 . 10/19/2005
I feel so bad for Reem, he is one of my favorite characters. I hope Adi can save them all. Hopefully backup shows up, or she all kinds of randomly gets some kind of magic power.
AubriannaKnight chapter 32 . 10/19/2005
I think that Adi leaving, and rushing off to Kieran's, was a lack of common sense. The way your story is written, she doesn't seem fully trained and strong enough to go up against Kieran yet... Is she enough of her own person again, as to not revert back into a state of servileness when she tries to go against him? Also in this last chapter (32) I was really confused. Why did it go back to her dream from the beginning of the story? It just randomly jumped, and I was like where did this come from, what does this mean?
AubriannaKnight chapter 29 . 10/18/2005
Oh NO! Poor micheal and Hunter. That (followed by a string of curses) just wants to draw her out. Good chapter. I'm glad the action finally started.
anewe chapter 28 . 10/15/2005
I think reem is really sweet i think hes great, he has to be my favourite character
AubriannaKnight chapter 28 . 10/14/2005
I love Reem!
AubriannaKnight chapter 26 . 10/13/2005
Kieran, just keeps getting worse and worse.. I friggin hate him.. growls! I hope it explains why he's such a d**k..Does he treat all his slaves this bad or just Adi? How would he treat her if she was all about him?
AubriannaKnight chapter 25 . 10/12/2005
This reveiw is gonna suck, but woo hoo.. i really like the new chapters. Poor Adi, I can't believe Kieran let her get so sick. This story is soon comeing to an end and it's making me so sad. I'm gonna miss it when it's over. I hope the ending has a nice suprise in store.
Fireeye Howlsong Rainpelt chapter 8 . 10/11/2005
Fairly long, I've only just finished chapter eight. But I really like it so far. I hope to get to some more chapters soon, but I'm not exactly sure when I'll be able to. Anyways, keep writing; you're good.
AubriannaKnight chapter 22 . 10/11/2005
Oh that poor girl .. Both Adi and Zoe, but especially Adi. She needs to find someone to get rid of her cat morphing powers. Wow so you had to go ahead and throw that major cliff hanger at me. I guess Adi's a princess of the vampire peoples then? If you don't update this they'll prolly have to lock me in an insane asylum for temporary insanity caused by your story withdrawl... lol
AubriannaKnight chapter 21 . 10/10/2005
yippie, i hope they get away..
AubriannaKnight chapter 20 . 10/10/2005
Kieran, that bastard!
AubriannaKnight chapter 19 . 10/10/2005
God, I think it's really stupid she left her safe house with so many protectors and the chance to learn to fight. Plus with Keiran so darn close. She's gonna get captured right away, and her escape attempt with Hunter will be in vain. sniffles, pouts, and crys
Damanta chapter 18 . 10/8/2005
This is an excellent story-I really enjoyed it. The characters are multi-dimensional and interesting. Can't wait to read more.~Damanta Sgath
Once upon a smile chapter 18 . 10/8/2005
What a completely awesome story! I really like it I think it's really great. Keep up the good work!
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