Reviews for Child of Darkness Book One
DreamerOfVampires chapter 15 . 10/4/2005
I really like your story and hope you update soon. Keep up the good work.
AubriannaKnight chapter 15 . 10/4/2005 updated so fast. wish the chapter was longer, but it was still kick ass.. i am so anxious for the return of kieran.
Kathryn Prescott chapter 14 . 10/3/2005
FYI it's set in the 'now' Kieran's just weird and likes the 1800 clothing. . . for awhile. . . he's weird, and evil. nothing he does should be taken too literally
AubriannaKnight chapter 10 . 10/3/2005
I have a question... What is the time period of your story? When I'm reading it, it feels as if it jumps around. I know some vamps might like to dress like back in the day, but parts of your story seem so now and then others come off so 1800's..
AubriannaKnight chapter 14 . 10/3/2005
I'm so stoked you finally updated. This chapter was amazing. I can't believe how well this is written. I wish I could come up with good ideas like you. Yeah I definitly can see why it took so long to update. I don't mind the wait as long as the chapters are as long and good as yours. kristen
AubriannaKnight chapter 7 . 9/30/2005
Update Update Update..This is an amazing story.
Kathryn Prescott chapter 2 . 9/16/2005
Zach can go out in the sunlight b/c he's just leet like that. . . actually all of the vampires in this world can. They just prefer the night. Or he could be using the sewer system, but I'm going with the first one. Kit
Kathryn Prescott chapter 13 . 9/16/2005
Please advertize me! I'll give you more chapters if you do! I want people to read and review, so that I have enough confidence to try to get Adianna's world published when it's
AubriannaKnight chapter 2 . 9/15/2005
In the one part if zack is a vampire how does he go to school in the sunlight to meet her ...
AubriannaKnight chapter 13 . 9/15/2005
wow, this is the most amazing story ever. You are a very talented and creative writer. You actually inspired to finish writing my vampire slave story. I don't know why you don't have reviews but you should. Let me know if you want me to advertize your story in my profile.. winks..
AubriannaKnight chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
I just found this, and am going to put it in my favorites and read it. I will review later..SMILES!
Sadistic-Nightmares chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
Nice follow-up. I like the flashback. Next chap will say it was a dream, right? At any rate, I think it was a good idea to shw what her life was like before Kieran(sp?). I'll be waiting for you next chapter.
Sadistic-Nightmares chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
I like this story a lot, it's very interesting. A helpful word of advice: I think that you're kinda forcing the relationship between Hunter and Adianna a little too fast. But otherwise, this is a great story. Keep writing!
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