Reviews for Child of Darkness Book One
DreamerOfVampires chapter 15 . 10/4/2005
I really like your story and hope you update soon. Keep up the good work.
AubriannaKnight chapter 15 . 10/4/2005 updated so fast. wish the chapter was longer, but it was still kick ass.. i am so anxious for the return of kieran.
Kathryn Prescott chapter 14 . 10/3/2005
FYI it's set in the 'now' Kieran's just weird and likes the 1800 clothing. . . for awhile. . . he's weird, and evil. nothing he does should be taken too literally
AubriannaKnight chapter 10 . 10/3/2005
I have a question... What is the time period of your story? When I'm reading it, it feels as if it jumps around. I know some vamps might like to dress like back in the day, but parts of your story seem so now and then others come off so 1800's..
AubriannaKnight chapter 14 . 10/3/2005
I'm so stoked you finally updated. This chapter was amazing. I can't believe how well this is written. I wish I could come up with good ideas like you. Yeah I definitly can see why it took so long to update. I don't mind the wait as long as the chapters are as long and good as yours. ~kristen
AubriannaKnight chapter 7 . 9/30/2005
Update Update Update..This is an amazing story.
Kathryn Prescott chapter 2 . 9/16/2005
Zach can go out in the sunlight b/c he's just leet like that. . . actually all of the vampires in this world can. They just prefer the night. Or he could be using the sewer system, but I'm going with the first one. ~Kit
Kathryn Prescott chapter 13 . 9/16/2005
Please advertize me! I'll give you more chapters if you do! I want people to read and review, so that I have enough confidence to try to get Adianna's world published when it's done.~Kit
AubriannaKnight chapter 2 . 9/15/2005
In the one part if zack is a vampire how does he go to school in the sunlight to meet her ...
AubriannaKnight chapter 13 . 9/15/2005
wow, this is the most amazing story ever. You are a very talented and creative writer. You actually inspired to finish writing my vampire slave story. I don't know why you don't have reviews but you should. Let me know if you want me to advertize your story in my profile.. winks..
AubriannaKnight chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
I just found this, and am going to put it in my favorites and read it. I will review later..SMILES!
Sadistic-Nightmares chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
Nice follow-up. I like the flashback. Next chap will say it was a dream, right? At any rate, I think it was a good idea to shw what her life was like before Kieran(sp?). I'll be waiting for you next chapter.
Sadistic-Nightmares chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
I like this story a lot, it's very interesting. A helpful word of advice: I think that you're kinda forcing the relationship between Hunter and Adianna a little too fast. But otherwise, this is a great story. Keep writing!
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