|Reviews for Unknown|
| Darkhymns chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Wow, the flow of this was almost impenetrable. The style and metaphors, just simply beautiful. Very, very well written.
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
lovely flow,great rhythm and you check some of my stuff out sometime?
| Simple Chaos chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
I rahter enjoyed this poem. The flow and story like rythem intrigued me. Thank you for your comments on mine.
| miss lavender chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
This, like everything else you write, was beautiful.. The metaphors were clearly pointed out; which leads to less confusion.. Or, at least, most of them. Some were left up to the reader. Great wording, it was fantastic! Keep it up! Please!