Reviews for Frozen under the Eyes |
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Alteng chapter 4 . 4/19/2006 Glad to see you back. This is still quite an amusing thought. Still love how emotionless the characters are towards each other and what not in the funniest situations. The dead bandits falling out the trees was fun too. |
Demeterr chapter 4 . 4/1/2006 Oh I like this story!Funny how Wardon and Relyn crashed into each other, and amusing how they still acted unfazed. Er yea, I hope you keep writing! |
Alteng chapter 3 . 7/28/2005 Hey there! Finally got back to reviewing. I have been off reading the new Harry Potter book for the last week and a half, and everything has been put off on the back burner. Wardon and relyn seem to enjoy the thrill of the fight. Are you trying to say that Wardon finds Relyn sexy when she is assertive? . . . or blood splatter. O, nothing like an aggresive dangerous woman! |
Alteng chapter 2 . 7/11/2005 And chapter 2. Excuse me if I have many misspllings. I brokw my glasses last night and I am faking this. I think that you should have classified this story under fantasy, then humor. But I don't usually haunt the humor section as much as I do the fantasy/humor. Another little thing/ You shouldn't reveal your bit about he accusations of Waydon peeping on Reylyn, especially if you plan to do ut later. I know gripe, gripe, but I am entertained by this story, and I hope you continue to write it. As far as your comment about this piece. I love writing that way, too. I am a fan of a sci-fi series called "Dr. Who" (It's kind of a British Star ATrek, but not as miltaristic) There are critters in the show that calim to be completely logical and emotionaless, but they go off ranting and raving. Now, minf you, anger and hatred are emotions too. |
Alteng chapter 1 . 7/11/2005 Thank you for the review on my story about Galen. Reading this piece, I can see why you would be interested. There is nothing so much fun as having one character so serious and the other one eather lightjearted and fun. |
Hopeless existence chapter 2 . 7/8/2005 Haha oh man that's going to be great...can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! :D |
Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose chapter 2 . 7/6/2005 Cool story. I think it's really funny when they're saying basically the same things but in different places...er. yeah. It's good |
Hopeless existence chapter 1 . 7/5/2005 Oh wow your story is really good, I liked how you some background to Wardon. It seems to be come along nice! Keep up the writing! :D |