|Reviews for Identity|
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
It began very strong and nicely, with good rhythm and strong tone. Just the "peel" rhyme sounded a bit forced, and the "fight to fight" a little unnecessary for what does he fight? With that you also don't need the "never losing to fright" it also sounds forced. Now remember, these are simply suggestions because I find the poem very nice. I like the narration by the Shadow, it sounds mysterious, almost forboding. Just sometimes things that sound awkward may detract from your piece.
| Drops of Acid chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
I really do hate you...I swear I am kidding...your poems are so good truthfully you are the first poetry writer to grab me (no pun intended) and hold me for so long and put images in my head (no pun intended also). You should really publish these if you haven't already.
| lookingwest chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
hm, good job, i like the "night, fight, fright" part.