Reviews for The Unmotivated Boy
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
I LOVE the imagery you used in this. It just paints this picture in my head, and it's lovely.

Also, the way this piece flowed-incredible! It didn't break at all. It was like a steady stream of water trickling into my head.
poetrypal chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
ooh i really liked this. powerful and to-the-point. i know exactly what you are talking about. great job!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Beautiful description and flow, powerful stirring of emotions.
salvati chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
"So with him upward I did goTrailing paper hearts"

I love that line. A fair amount of love, too, not just a little bit that I'll forget about in 5 seconds from now. I just saw the best image in my head because of it; and I adore you for it. :D

Sucks that he turned out to have only quartz in his eyes, dudette. I hope you find the one with the diamonds in his eyes sometime soon.