Reviews for American Muslim
nishat chapter 2 . 1/11/2012
okayyy... i dunno what's up with the asterisk ( see the review below ) but as i said its supposed to be "kum"
nishat chapter 2 . 1/11/2012
wow. this is really beautiful and touching and sad, but it IS meant to be that way. I am a muslim girl from India. I absolutely love this. I hope everyone out there reads this, no really! Please write more i really want to read more of this. P.S. : actually, its supposed to be 'assalamu-alai-kum' and 'wa-alai-kumus-salam'. Just saying...
Ambyy chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
that was an amazing story. I hope you continue. people need to hear these sort of stuff to stuff them from judging the Muslims
Moosher chapter 2 . 1/25/2006
Pretty awsome of you to post this here.. I loved your depiction of the whole experience in your POV in the first chapter especially. I think that was how I imagined it to be. All I want to say is that you have more bravery and courage than you think.. Don't let it get you down.. Think of all this as a test to you and everyone from Allah. all the humiliation you take is not forgotten, and all the patience you have will be rewarded.. I hope you fully understand that.. N e ways, I think I needed to say that! lol.. well, great writing. Keep it up and God Bless!

aims80 chapter 2 . 7/9/2005
I really like this so far and I think it is a good idea for you to write about things from the perspective of a muslim so yeah, keep up the good work.
playing.with.scissors chapter 2 . 7/8/2005
this story is beautiful and well written. i can't even begin to imagine what you and many like you had to go though following 9/11. i can't wait to read more...
aries-diva-JC chapter 2 . 7/6/2005
this is also a great chapter... u do a great job of expressing the emotions u felt... one suggestion i have for u is not to repeat words to many times close to eachother. like, don't use a word and then use it again in the next sentence and again in the sentence after that if u can help it... thats just a pet peave of mine... but other than that, it was very well-written... i especially like the part where u describe Mrs. Richard... keep up the good work...
aries-diva-JC chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
great story... it seems like it'll be very sad, but so far, its beautifully written... your writing is very clever, too... i especially love the part where u say 'That is probably why I was so clumsy for I had knowledge of how to greet a Janitor or President. I had knowledge of how to behave, among underlings, peers, and the Greats. Yet I had no experience with even the smallest of society’s rituals.'... great job... can't wait to read more...