Reviews for Hollow
J. N. Laerasyn chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Ack! I loved that. It takes talent to write poetry in that sort of dialouge form. I think so anyway. I love the "tap tap" repetition. Even the shape of the poem gives it a certain rythym where there technically isnt any... By the time you get to the college line, the questions are begining to get a little redundant, but you follow up pretty well. I wonder: did you have some instance or meaning in mind for each of those questions, or did you just think of questions people ask all the time?
Lurking-Shadow chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
wow i like it. It's really different from most of the other poems I've read. But I can relate SO MUCH! I dunno, but for some reason, the tap tap part made me feel kind of emotional. Anyway, really good work!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
that was kinda funny to nto really sure what its about, but i like it anyway