That was a beautiful poem. You did a wonderful job writing it. Good work!

I liked ur poem!...very good...anyways...keep writing...RingWraith

Very good! I couldn't help laughing at the seductiveness, but it was very well written and the seductiveness was wonderful because it wasn't too...sultry? Is that the right word? O well rearange the letters and take out an R and I think you might get something... Anywhoo love the ending and the part that says "we could fall in an intertwinement of libs." Quite a lot of images there...lol jk Very nice poem!

wow...(speechless and blushing) that was wonderful. i've tried to put lust and what anyone feels when ...anyway good one!